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Sorry, I'm kind of hyper right now...FUZZY PICKLES!! (inside joke) No, not in that way that you're thinking, creeper. o.O So...since it's officially summertime, I'm going to post a somewhat sucky song that I wrote the lyrics to last year...or 2 years ago, idk...called Summertime. Who would have guessed?? Oh yeah, and idk if I'm going to center my posts. If someone with an account on here is actually reading this, could you post a comment below or send me a message on WCC2 saying if I should or not?? What do you guys think?? Oh yeah, and I do write songs....sucky songs xD Wow this is going to be embarrassing....but, hey, it's my blog, so...I'm going to do a commentary on it....
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Summertime
By: Shalana Black
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Hangin' out with our friends (5)
Just chill-axin' (1, 5, 9)
And the breeze is flowin' in our hair
Romance is in the air
And new love is everywhere
And that's when I realize: (2, 9)
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Chorus: It's finally Summertime (3)
With bonfires every night
And fireflies
We can finally just enjoy the Summertime (3, 4, 7, 9)
Goin' swimmin' (5)
Tannin' at the beach (5)
Jumpin' on the trampoline (5)
Drinkin' lemonade in flip-flops (5)
And short shorts, tanktops and mini skirts
We welcome you Summertime (3, 4, 7, 9)
You're just sooo fine (4)
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We love you Summertime (3, 7)
When school's over
No more homework
No more 6 A. M. (6)
You know what, I'll sleep in (4)
I can be lazy, and still crazy (4)
'Cause,
(Chorus)
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You give us hope (7)
You give us strength (7)
No more weaklings
'Cause now we have our faith (5, 7)
And more stressin' out (5, 8)
And worrin' 'bout (5, 8)
Everything
'Cause,
(Chorus)
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I can't have enough of you, Summertime (3, 4, 7)
Oh, Summertime (3)
I can't have enough of you, Summertime, oh yay, Summertime. Whew! (3, 4, 7, 9)
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(1) What was I thinking?? Chill-axin'?? WTH??
(2) And is used many times in that verse!! And what's up with the colon?
(3) Why is summertime capitalized??
(4) Where did that line come from?? Did I just need something that rhymed?? Some of it doesn't really rhyme, anyways....
(5) What is up with all the " ' "??
(6) I didn't get up at 6 A. M. when I wrote this...
(7) Okay, what is all this "we, us, you" crap??
(8) SHUT UP "and's"!!
(9) I must have been drinking rum or something!!
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o.O It's over here this time!!
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Peace out!!
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♥ Shalana Black ♥
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♥ Bluey ♥

Lucky! I still have 2 weeks! And yes, you must have been drinking rum :)
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